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The Status of Women in Modern Society

This essay analyzes the status of women in society. More specifically, the author delves into the Ibo society and discusses women's prestige, honor, security, children, and economic responsibilities.
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"Your paper is off to an excellent start. You have done a great job with the formatting. Neat formatting is essential for reading comprehension and writing cohesion. You also did a fantastic job with the content. You have included great facts about your topic that support the points you are trying to make. I recommend that you make sure that all of your in-text citations are consistently formatted, that all material you obtained from texts is adequately cited and that you have references that match all the in-text citations. This will ensure that you avoid potential plagiarism issues. The organization of your paper is the part that needs the most work. As written, your paper does not have a clear introduction. Instead, the paper should start with general background information about your topic, followed by a thesis statement. The thesis statement should identify specific aspects of your topic that you will write about and why they are essential. The body of your paper should then align with the thesis statement, and the conclusion should summarize the main points made in the body of the paper. This will make it more clear what the purpose of your essay is and show that you are focused on that purpose throughout your writing. The conventions are the last aspect of your paper that needs the most work. To improve reading comprehension and writing cohesion, you must resolve several grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation errors throughout your piece."

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