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Kibin. (2024). Airbags pose risks when deployed. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/airbags-pose-risks-when-deployed-AdzGB3uI
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"You make good arguments, but you should consider all aspects of the issue. For example, you imply that manufacturers include warning labels due to the danger of airbags, but they could be doing this to avoid legal liability. You write both “airbags” and “air bags.” Which is correct? You should write terms consistently. As a matter of style, consider citing sources in the body so as to avoid lengthy URLs, which seriously affect formatting. This is seen to great effect in the second paragraph."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). Airbags pose risks when deployed. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/airbags-pose-risks-when-deployed-AdzGB3uI
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("Airbags Pose Risks When Deployed.")
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"Airbags Pose Risks When Deployed." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/airbags-pose-risks-when-deployed-AdzGB3uI
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1. "Airbags Pose Risks When Deployed." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/airbags-pose-risks-when-deployed-AdzGB3uI.
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"Airbags Pose Risks When Deployed." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/airbags-pose-risks-when-deployed-AdzGB3uI.
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