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My heart raced each breath became harder This is how it always ends in the movies I thought to myself We have to get back to the beach now As a kid my friend Ashley and I would watch Jaws or Deep Blue Sea almost every time I went over even though I spent the majority of it hiding under blankets She absolutely loves those movies while I on the other hand have never been a huge fan I would always come home with nightmares about shark attacks and yet I continued to watch them My sister and I practically ran off the plane raged with excitement as any nine year old would be Even being my third trip to Hawaii I acted as if Id never been before Although most of the excitement came from the curiosity that occupied my mind of what we would see and do I was more than happy to see my family after 4 years On top of all that we were going to be in a wedding for my aunt Most of our trip was spent baking cookies and preparing for the wedding but we always took breaks to go to the beach The smell of salt intoxicated the air as we pulled into the parking lot Come on I started to run through the hot sandWait up she called after me struggling to keep up We immediately started digging a hole close enough to the water that it filled upDad look our own pool My sister squealedI looked around and notice my mother aunt and cousin werent around Where did everyone go I looked at DadSurfing He gestured towards the water I gazed over the water until they catch my eye That looks fun I whispered to myself I sat waiting patiently in our pool for my mom to return back to shore I stared into the distance to see her walking towards us surf board in
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