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The Roles and Responsibilities of a Computer Systems Analyst

This is an essay about the computer system analyst profession. The author highlights the responsibilities of a computer system analyst while also discussing the job market and the outlook for the career.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Jenn's feedback:

"Your paper is off to a good start. It is clear from your introduction what the purpose of your essay is, and it is apparent that you remained focused on that purpose throughout your writing. You also did a reasonable job with the content of your paper, including factual information to support your ideas and citing material to avoid plagiarism issues. A couple of recommendations I have regarding citations are that rather than using lengthy quotes, paraphrase material; if you must use long quotes, then make them block quotes; ensure that citations are correctly formatted; and ensure that you adequately cite all factual information from other sources. You also did a reasonably good job with the writing conventions, with very few grammar, punctuation, or sentence structure errors found. The primary issues with the essay are regarding organization and formatting. Despite having a clear introduction, you do not have an apparent conclusion. Unfortunately, this leads to the paper not feeling finished. A conclusion should summarize the main points you made in the body of the document and should relate them to the thesis statement in the introduction. Lastly, several areas of the paper need to be reformatted. First, there is a place where a line is separated. Second, there is extra, unnecessary space between paragraphs. Last, the table is not formatted to allow the information to be understood."

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