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We all know that life is unfair but sometimes it is worth it to goagainst the norm I did this once In fifth grade After lunch in one of the earlymonths of the school year we were supposed to get recess Instead ofgetting recess we got to go to class Now I know that in fifth gradeyou should start maturing for middle school but I needed some recesstime Mr McCormick was the head of the lower school at that time Iwanted to have recess so I decided to write up a proposition for morerecess I came home that day feeling proud of myself because this wouldbe my first time really doing something for the benefit of others Itold my mom and dad and they were really happy that I was going to sosomething about it because I had been complaining to them about nothaving recess My mom offered to help me with it because I was in fifthgrade and the I felt really good about the end product I decided tomake it a petition then because my mom and I thought that it would havemore of an effect on our principal Mr McCormick The next day I goteveryone I could find to sign it After about a week I had almosteveryones signatures on the petition and thought it was about time tobring it to Mr McCormick When I was walking to his office I started to really freak out Whenhis assistant said that I could go ahead I remember feeling reallyintimidated and nervous Honestly he had always scared me now it wasamped up much more I only remember a couple of things about him forexample he was tall he laughed too much at the wrong things he talkedtoo much tried too hard and he had the longest ear hair I have everseen besides in the Guinness Book of World Records I remember standingin front of his desk and him not paying attention to me Finally
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