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The Advantages and Benefits of a Diverse Workforce

This essay discusses the benefits of a diverse workforce. The student argues that having a diverse workforce leads to increased worker productivity, aids innovative thinking and problem-solving, and improves upon a company's public image and talent acquisition efforts.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Beth's feedback:

"This is a really solid paper! You very nicely laid out your argument for the benefits of a diverse workforce, and incorporated several examples to support your thesis. My biggest overall recommendation would be to wrap it all up with a nice conclusion at the end, summarizing at a high level what you accomplished in the paper. I did not see any major errors in the text, but I do recommend revisiting your Works Cited formatting. For instance, if using MLA, website citations require an access date. Additionally, I don't see any in-text citations for the authors listed in your Works Cited area, so I recommend reviewing the rules for when to include a parenthetical with the author name(s), etc."

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