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Factors to Consider when Recruiting Online

This informative essay explores the role played by online recruiting at the turn of the millennium. The student profiles CareerBuilder, describes the impact of "passive applicants," and explains what happens after an organization decides to recruit online.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You've written a focused and efficient paper. By clearly defining the purpose and moving logically across the discussion, you ensure the reader can follow both the key points and supporting details. Solidly structured paragraphs also facilitate the reading experience. I question the effect and efficacy of the very long quotation breaking over pages 1 and 2; similarly, the first para. 3 quote has some bracketing that needs to be fixed--it may be better for visual clarity and control over the material to revise that area (for example, using paraphrasing) and eliminate the need for brackets.

Likewise in the service of clarity and readability, make sure to use a thorough proofread as you move into any final draft. The overall control is sound, but I do spot some minor errors, typos, and some awkward local syntax that should be polished up for flow, ethos, and clarity. Similarly, make sure all formatting (line spacing, etc.) is aligned with your style guide; the current single spacing and absence of indents creates barriers to readability."

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