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7 years ago my family and I moved from Houston TX to the little town of Tomball TX where everyone knows everyone I was 11 at the time so i was still in intermediate school We setteled in met new people and started a new life Two years passed and tragedy struck I lost my bestfriend my great grandmother Alice March 5th 2007 the day after my 13th birthday It was a normal after birthday day where everyone ask youHow does it feel to be a year older But something feels off I got off the bus like normal with a smiling face and both of my hands on my backpack straps Then I looked on my porch thats when I saw my grandma and my older sister I was confused I was expecting smiling faces like usual all I saw were red puffy eyes runny noses and faces of sadness I didnt know what was going on My sister walked up to me and held me tight and started to cry harder My heart started to race I didnt know what was going on until she finally said something in between sobs Jenn now listen to me Nanny is gone she told Memaw to tell you Happy Birthday and that she loved you very very much My throat began to tighten and my eyes started to water I couldnt control my emotions I pushed away from my sister and shook my head in disbelief Stop lying to me I dont believe you She was doing so good How could she I threw down my bag and started to runI ran as far as I could but my heart was slowing me down it felt like there was a ton of bricks in my chest I could barely see past the tears in my eyes all I wanted to do is run away from the truth I didnt want it to be real this couldnt
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