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Bridget's feedback:
"This is a lyrical essay that allows your passion to come forward. Because this essay makes medical claims alongside less quantifiable claims, I want to check in regarding the purpose, essay parameters, and more generally, the rhetorical situation. The current draft suggests an audience in agreement with the various claims, and if so, the current style, tone, and pitch do indeed seem suitable. An essay aiming at a more general audience or seeking to persuade skeptics will benefit from the incorporation of peer-reviewed sources (this is something that would also benefit an essay whose audience is already in agreement).
I will recommend as well a careful proofread to ensure all word choice is precise and clear, particularly in the lyrical mode where diction can range a bit further afield -- keep in mind the balance between style and direct communication."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). How yoga enriches our life. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-yoga-enriches-our-life-oct8Yqot
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