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The Microsoft Antitrust Case

This essay discusses the antitrust case against Microsoft Corporation for the bundling of the Internet Explorer Web browser with the Windows operating system.
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"Titles such as “attorney general” should not be capitalized when not associated with a specific person. You capitalize inconsistently as well, e.g., “Justice department,” “the Department.” Take care to include articles as appropriate, e.g., “the software market.” As a modifier, “market development” should be hyphenated. A century such as “1900s” should include no apostrophe. Avoid informal expressions such as contractions. An extraneous word appears (“However Microsoft still …”), and a lack of spaces confuses the next sentence (“On May 12 …”). You spell “cited” as “sited.” You can avoid many such problems by running a grammar check and proofreading your work. To improve your organization, you can clarify your introduction and conclusion by setting them off in short paragraphs."

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