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The Causes and Environmental Problems of Extensive Use of Pesticides by Farmers

This essay is about the harm that pesticides have on the environment. Herbicides, insecticides, and fungicides lead to pollution, soil degradation, and insect resistance.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Overall, your paper is off to an excellent start. In general, the formatting of your essay is incredible, which is essential for reading comprehension and writing cohesion. I recommend that you remove the extra space between paragraphs and check the formatting of your references. You also have a good handle on writing conventions. Some word choice, punctuation, and grammar errors need to be resolved, but not enough that readability is affected. The content of your paper is excellent. You have included a significant amount of factual information to support the points that you are trying to make. I suggest that you consider removing wording that is not scholarly, though. The organization is the main aspect of your writing that needs to be worked on. The paper does not seem to have an introduction or conclusion. An introduction should include a brief amount of background information about the topic and a clear and concise thesis statement that identifies the specific aspects of the topic you intend to cover and why those aspects are important. The thesis statement will then guide the body of the paper, leading to the conclusion. The conclusion will then summarize the main points made in the document's body and relate them to the thesis statement. Doing this will make your paper's purpose more straightforward and show the reader that you are focused on that purpose throughout your writing."

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