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It was my freshman year of high school It was a near year a new me I was so tired of being the girl who never did any extra curriculum activities tired of being the one who was shy So with the new me I decided to be in band something I never thought I would do I decided to play the bass drums while I was in band Keep in mind Ive never played anything before in my life and I didnt know how to read music I knew this was going to be a challenge for me and of course it wasMy friend and I both joined band At first it was all right I could watch the other people play it and then I could just copy all of their moves I could play pretty much all the songs just by watching them play The band teacher tried to teach me but no matter how hard I tried I couldnt get it It was so frustrating Then came the harder part He gave us different parts so now we werent all playing the same part I was playing a different part I could not figure out how to play it so my friend decided to try to teach me that part I was very grateful for her help At the time I didnt know that later we would be playing other instruments in the percussion which required way different music than bass drum parts Just when I thought I was learning to read bass drum music he went and changed it all on me No the conclusion was not I learning to play instead it was I quitting all together The reason was because I couldnt read and because if you dont know how to play then everyone gripes at you I know
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