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It was time for church camp again and this year was going to be totally different See last year John went because it seemed like a fun thing to do but now things have happened big things It was about six months ago that Johns brother had died in a car accident Time seemed to be flying by with so much happening all at one time For about four weeks after the death he spent a lot of time in his room staying away from all the people coming in and out of the house He really distanced himself from his family and friends not wanting to have to come close Now about ready to go back to camp he only has one true friend and thats in his youth leader hes the only one that really know whats going through Johns mind The trip down was a time where he thought a lot and really didnt see how this week at camp was going to be any good for him at all So as they got there everyone around was all excited for the week and running around visiting while john sat on the bed until night service Each night has a theme commitment night help night future night and the first night is just a welcome back night One of Johns old friends seen him sitting there and decided to force him to get up and sing like everyone else was doing After that nights service was over Jane his friend pulled him to the side and asked what was going on John told her how he feels angry that God took his brother from him How is he supposed to put faith into what he has in store for him when he took so much Jane really had no answer for thisThe next day went on and a little bit at a time he participated in stuff then it was time for
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