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Most think of a church and they picture a building where they arerequired to be every Sunday to be accepted among religious communitiesA steeple stained windows pews and a few statues of the virgin marryI see mine as a safe haven A resting place when life gets too hard tostand and I need to be surrounded by those who can help me back up Butwe call it TenTen isnt a very outwardly pretty place It consists of dark wallsfold-out chairs and a smooth concrete floor that can never be clean nomatter how many times it is swept Many people including myself haveworked hard at creating something beautiful with colored lightsbanners and a few buckets of paint I know it doesnt make muchdifference but to me it is as beautiful as the memories it holdsThe stage is a work of art made from little equipment Variousintimidating-looking cables a drum set a keyboard and two guitarsAll are owned not by Ten but by the people who want to help with whattheyve been given In the back corner of the stage there is a carpetedbox covered by a soft black sheet This is the place where I belongstanding and pouring my heart out on six thin strings Behind me is awarm colored light that illuminates the area On the front of the stageis a microphone where the singer shares his blessed voice and where thepastor will soon be sharing his messageJust outside the doors of the building people are socializing andmeeting new people Nobody is left alone for long or sitting apart fromeveryone else The warm Texas air is the perfect accent to the friendlyfaces surrounding me Friends talk to each other while sitting in treesthat for some reason grow sidewaysAt first glance most might say that my church is cold but I findwarmth in every friend there Maybe they think its gloomy but thememories serve as the most vibrant decorations I could think to placeIf they say
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