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Someone who greatly influeced me was my most recent volleyball coach He played a very important role in my very first year of volleyball My coach encouraged me to do my best motavated me to join my highschool team and his positive outlook was key to making the exsperience more fun Firstly my coach encouraged me to do my best He belives in my ability and wants me to be the best that I can be He helps me by pushing me giving me great advice and asking me to stay after practice to work on things that I may need extra help on Sometimes his daughter will come to practice to help out too She is a fantastic all round volleyball player She made Varsity team in her Freshman year My coach calls her my big sisterSecondly my coach motavated me to go out for highschool season He prepared me with the skills I needed He also found out when camp took place and let me know He talked to the highschool coach introduced me and even came to the camp to make shore I was trying my hardest and proforming my best He sends me text and emails to make sure that Im staying fit and active He even took me to watch an 18 year old libero that way I know how Im supposed to move and how quick the postion should be playedLastly my coach has a very positve outlook on the game He wants us to have loads of fun but still learn at the same time Hes always out of his seat cheering us on and making so much noise you cant even hear the refferies wistle In our meetings he gives us pep talks telling us that we can come back nomatter what the score It could be 10-1 or even 24-15 After every game win or lose we have a gameball The player that stood out most
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