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My fingers started slipping off the edge one by one The hesitation in my body made it feel like I wasnt going to make it off the ledge Oh how I wish I had gone with Clare I was selfish I felt the guilt coming up my throat I felt hopeless I tried to keep my grip longer but it felt helpless The only thing running through my veins and brain was Can I hold on any longer Was seven minutes ago the last time I kissed Clare All these negative thought wouldnt go away It wasnt helping the situation I was in Holding my grip as hard as I could with all the might I had For Care I said quietly to myself I looked into the sky living in New York City it was hard to see the stars The city lights out shinned the stars Expect the moon I could feel the moon beaming down on my sweaty forehead For a second I observed the sky really good and I saw a shooting star I made a wish Dealing with life and death the only thing a man can do is have hope at least I couldnt do anything to keep holding onto the small handles of the ledge I was losing my grip Its only been ten minutes which felt like forever I slowly removed one hand off the ledge and dug into my pickets The only I felt was a paper clip pencil and of course the yellow paper The yellow paper that caused this situation the first place While scattering my pockets with my free hand I heard footsteps coming hear Clack Clack Clack they went I felt a relief going down my spine Those footsteps coming near me sounded like Clares high heels Clare Clare I shouted Clare ClareThe noise of the heels moved faster toward meTom Baby she said scared walking towards She tried opening the
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