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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your position you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your positionThere are different factors that contribute to peoples behavior Generally speaking we can categorize all factors in two prominent domains namely internal and external stimuli Developing the each category we can conclude that peoples behavior is significantly based on the interaction of both internal and external stimuli rather than mirroring their own thoughts and desiresTo begin with we need to know what the internal and external stimuli stands for Internal motivators are restricted to ones intrinsic values Those motifs include many characteristics that mainly are related to our nature like the genetics factors moods knowledge experience accomplishments and so on External motivators on the other hand are mostly related to ones extrinsic values For instance the kind of career you have the position you have both at home and at workplace and your responsibilities In both categories we can evaluate people based on the powerful values they have The most powerful persons values are the less external or internal forces make them to react or decide in a specific way Therefore a person can build hisher life based on own desirable thoughts if only she possess a high level of intrinsic and extrinsic values You cannot expect a poor man to dont turn into a vagabond or pickpocket To help such people we have to improve their personal values From another point of view some intrinsic and extrinsic values have the power to control our behaviors to some extent For instance if you have got admirable achievements in the past it is more probable that you try to submit others to your own desires in a seat of leader or organizer
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