An Argument Against Censorship of the Internet by the US Government

In this argumentative essay, the student states that hate speech on the internet should not be censored by the government due to impracticality and the dangerous precedent that such censorship would set.

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"You make some strong arguments against internet censorship and draw from a wide array of examples. However, there are some areas that need to be addressed to strengthen your claims and make your arguments clearer.

The phrase "this being entirely factual" is not only unnecessary but can undermine your credibility (suggesting that other parts of your paper may not be accurate).

You make some broad claims that need some support. For example, you state that censorship comes from fear of the unknown. This is certainly debatable and should be backed up. You also claim that internet censorship is not possible, but some governments have had a measure of success with censoring certain subjects on the internet. This counterargument should be explored to strengthen your claims.

There are frequent grammatical errors and awkward sentences that should be addressed by a thorough round of proofreading."

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