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I was born in Methodist Hospital in Brooklyn New York on July 16 1986 According to my mother and father I was the most beautiful baby in the world I was an early talker which explains why I love to talk so much now I had no fear on the playground and I could swim under water at three years old All my cousins were born the same year except for one My brother was born when I was six Hes my little buddy I went to dancing school gymnastics and in the fifth grade had an experience to perform on stage with the PS 312 chorus at Madison Square Garden theatre in A Christmas Carol In the sixth grade I became a student at IS 78 Roy H Mann Junior High School It was the best of times and it was the worst of times sometimes as bad as they can get During my three years in Roy Mann I met many people and learned many new things I swam on the swimming team for Good Shepard parish I was one of the best swimmers on the team being that I was a natural at the age of three I am in summer school now and I will make sure that I will never have to attend it again I will do my work as well as it can be done from now on But lets end this on good note I am going to get myself out of this school and into Madison High School I intend to make my high school years count toward a great future I am going to model and act I intend to go to FIT with my cousins Danielle and Lauren We are planning on going into the fashion business together If you ask me thats ending this on a good noteor begining
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