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When they saw him walking across our high school campus most students couldnt help but notice Bruce Tall and lanky he was thinner replica of James Dean his hair flipped back above his forehead and his eyebrows always cocked upward when he was in deep conversation He was tender thoughtful and profound He would never hurt anyoneI was just breaking up with may not-so-smart boyfriend the one you stayed with went back to 30 times out of bad habit when Bruce headed me off at the campus pass one morning to walk with me He help me carry my books and made me laugh a dozen times with giddiness I like him I really liked himHe scared me because he was brilliant But in the end I realized I was more scared of myself than of himWe started to walk together more at school I would peer up at him from my stuffed locker my heart beating rapidly wondering if he would ever kiss me Wed been seeing each other for several weeks and he still hadnt tried to kiss meInstead hed hold my hand put his arms around me and send me off with one of my book class When I opened it a handwritten note in his highly stylized writing would be there speaking of love and passion in deeper sense than I could understand at 17He would send me books cards notes and would sit with me my house for hours listening to music He especially liked me to listen to the song You Brought Some Joy Inside My Tears by Stevie WonderAt work one day I receive a card from him that said I miss you when Im sad I miss you when Im lonely But most of all I miss you when Im happyI remember walking down the street of our small village cars honking the warm lights from stores beckoning strollers to come in from the cold and all
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