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PlansIt was a gorgeous summer morning as I my brother David sisterMarcia mom dad and baby girl were traveling home to Laramie fromColorado Springs where we had gone to visit my grandma The atmospherein the car was fun and filled with laughter We were glad to be together Ourchatter was constant and our conversations often overlapped One learnedyoung that if you want to be heard in my family you must merely speaklouder than everyone else Or you might simply say Would you please shutup for a minute so I can say something important We all understood thatsuch a plain and politely spoken command was not meant to be offensive orat all disrespectfulWe were a bit louder than usual that morning as we had great plans forthe day Since we had to travel through Denver we all agreed that we shouldeat at a nice restaurant and then go to the zoo where we could eat some moreand see the animals then probably eat some moreDaddy was a bit tense and growly his usual demeanor when trafficwas thick as it was on that Friday morning Everyone and their Grandma ison this one road to Denver he grumbled My Daddy is claustrophobic Hehates traffic which is the main reason I think we moved long ago toWyoming the land of wide-open spaces You can drive more than ahundred miles on a Wyoming highway without seeing another car Daddywould often bragThat was not the case however in Colorado The cars were lined upone after another traveling 75 miles per hour to the horizon and beyond Wepassengers paid scant attention to the outside world as we were involved in athought-provoking discussion regarding the strengths and weaknesses of thehighly educational hit movie of the summer Independence Day The movieanswered the question Are we alone in the Universe with a loud no whenaliens arrived and began demolishing major cities all over the world We allgazed out the windshield as we laughed at my
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