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About two years ago my mother and I went for a day of shopping at Pebbles It seemed like a regular day but I was fooled I did my usual thing I left my mom and went shopping on my own As I walked around the store I felt eyes watching me I didnt pay attention to it though I found a couple of pairs of jeans and a shirt that I liked I gathered them up and headed to the dressing room As I was walking to the dressing room I saw some sunglasses I liked I decided to pick them up and try them on with my newly found outfits I made my way to the dressing room and tried my clothes on After I tried them on I grabbed the clothes and headed out I hung the clothes up and walked off to find my mom As I was walking to find my mother a person tapped me on my shoulders I turned around slowly and noticed this six foot eight monster My stomach dropped and I began to tremble She said in a deep voice Excuse Me Where are those glasses I didnt reply to her because I was still in shock She said again Excuse Me Where are those glasses I said softly On the rack I guess No the ones you had she replied I looked at her and said I dont know I guess they are still in the dressing room She said to me in a sharp voice Can you go get them I didnt want to seem mean so I said yes As we walked back to the dressing room I could feel a million eyes watching me I walked into the dressing room and picked up the glasses I gave them to her quickly and walked off She didnt say thank you or anything Since I didnt receive any respect I decided to mess with
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