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I have three days until Valentines Day I sit at my polished mahogany desk Tchaikovsky thundering behind me and ponder how to further woo Julie the woman Im falling in love with I consider taking her out of town for the weekend but a lack of funding precludes a trip I could send her flowers if I hadnt sent her roses a month prior Maybe I should take her out to dinner-- no a simple dinner reeks of simplicity Hmm I mumble what can we do thats romantic and doesnt cost very much It comes to me in a flash of insight I can replay our first date The plan crystallizes as our first date replays through my mind Well journey to the beach in the afternoon Well eat at that little pizza place What did they call it Oh yeah its named Felipes Sentimental value increases the greasy joints romantic appeal After dinner Ill offer her my arm and we will meander down the boardwalk preceding sunset When our feet bring us below the Pacific Palms Hotel where our lips first touched Ill kiss her again When our intimate embrace concludes Ill guide her farther along the boardwalk to the gray concrete bench we held each other on that beautiful night Sitting on that too-uncomfortable bench I will cradle her in my arms and watch the sun slide below the horizon My body shivers as I envisage holding her tight to keep her warm Well sit there with her wrapped tightly in my arms and watch the day fade Confusion besets me Where should I go from there I cant expect her to want to just leave after that sacred moment It needed something more My right calf muscle spasms as I wade through the possibilities Nothing comes to me that seems perfect Once again inspiration shakes me Ill write her a letter A long poetic sharing of how I care
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