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I heard a knock at the front door and a voice spoke is Tiffiany home it was my date I never knew it but my life to a turn for the worst After my first date I vowed to never date again It became difficult to pull everything together and make it go right but I guess it was because I waited to the last minute Getting ready for this date was the longest most drawn out hectic hour and a half of my life The preparation for this date was like getting ready for a photo shoot actually worse at least I got paid for the photo shoot It was so crazy that I found myself loosing things that were right in front of my face Between finding the right hairstyle making my date wait and messing up the entire night my first date made a second one far from my mind I found that the hardest part of the night was finding a hairstyle that was suitable for the activities we had set forth We planned on going to the movies then out to eat and then to go to his mothers house I tried several things but none of them worked I started with trying to pull my hair up in a clamp but it was flying everywhere The edges of my hair would not lie down for anything in the world that night My hair looked like a perm was way past overdue I must have tried everything from oil sheen to hair mayonnaise trying to get my hair straight Using all of that made my hair too frizzy to hang down That was extremely terrible because I had decided that was how I wanted my hair I pulled out the hot curlers and the flat irons and went to work After awhile I finally got it straight but it was too weighed down to work with It was time
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