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Have you ever seen a big black cat or a black panther up close I have with my mother going to the creek It all started when I was about seven or eight My family started taking me to the creek behind my house It was like a family tradition to me by the time I turned ten Seeing the panther when I was ten years old scared me till I almost didnt want to go back but I did The moment we saw the big cat it was heading up the bank into the woods It was luck that the big cat was heading away from us So when you are thinking of a creek what do you picture You picture the different shapes sizes and colors of the trees Or the crisp clean and fresh smell of the water with a clear view to the creeks floor Were you see the slit pebbles and some small derby lying around on the floor As somebody decides to swim the pebbles and slit are stirred up and the clear water turns cloudy and nasty looking Last the rocks the miles and miles of rocks lining the creek bed as far as the human eye can see Or the sharp and jagged rocks that hurt so much when you step on one of them with bare feet The rocks can also be many different colors like green from the algae to an orange color that looks almost like rust In the end have you ever considered a creek your second home I do The first time I had ever went to the creek was with both my mother and grandpa I loved it so much that I always wanted to be at the creek it was like love at first sight So after a while I began to beg my grandpa to take me to creek when my mom was at work That was where
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