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It all started with a phone call Its 730 am and my phone rings All I can think of is who in the world is calling me this early Then I hear the most terrifying words a sister can hear Davas been in an accident and its bad My heart dropped All I could think of was dear God please let my baby sister be alrightWide awake I got dressed and ran out the door On the way to town I got my other two sisters Amy and Stephany and we made our way to The Childrens Hospital in Macon Georgia Having never been there in my life and with my fear of drivng on the interstate I got to the hospital in about an hour Once we got there and found my sisters ICU room I will never forget what I saw There layed my precious fourteen year old baby sister She was alseep due to morphine With my family all in tears I too tried to hold myself together and I walked over to her bed side There were so many Doctors so many wires She had cuts all over her there was dirt all in her hair and her hair was soaked All could do was look at her and think to myself what in the world happened I then saw her injuries I was in disbelief She had two slits from her wrist to her elbow and a broken leg I hated seeing her injured but I was greatful that this was all the injuries she had After she woke I kissed her cheeked trying not to cryand I told her I loved her She tried to be brave but I could see the fear and pain in her eyes All she could say to me was im sorry im sorry This made me cry and it broke my heart Then one of her docters came
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