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I have lived in this mansion most of my life though it was not always a peaceful place The mansion is in the middle of now where in Scotland and was built in 1769 I shall now start my story from the start when I first arrived at the mansion As I drove up the dark and creepy driveway I wondered why the mansion was so cheap Sure there were rumors of ghost vampires and other movie monsters since the mansion was so old but they were just rumors When I finally reached the end of the driveway I with held the most beautiful house I have ever seen It was a dark house with big windows a double front door just like the mansions you see in horror movies When I reached the front door I could hear noises from the back of the house but I thought it was just the wind The front door was huge with an old creepy knocker I slowly opened the door and as I took my first step I could smell the oldness and dust from the house When I finally took my first step in the house the floor boards craked under my weight The entrance hall was massive with a staircase in the middle and doors at each side of the hall up and down stairs I went up stair to look for a room to unpack and sleep for it was really late BANG I woke up from a loud banging noise from downstairs I quickly got dress and ran downstairs As I reached the bottom the front door was shaking like someone was banging on it to get in When I walked up to the door I grabed a pool cue which I left downstairs I shouted at who ever was banging on my door to stop so I could open it The shaking stopped I opened the door slowly and when
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