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I sat in the cold room and there was nothing but a mattress and me within the beige colored walls The metal door with only a small window taunted me My heart was beating rapidly as tears surged down my now red cheeks like raindrops in a spring downpour I couldnt get over how the nurse had treated us She made it seem as If we were toys that had been broken and there was no way to mend them I had thought she was supposed to be there for us we all had thought this but apparently we were wrongSix days earlier I had been at home living life as always but all that changed on the night of December 19 My mom and I sat in the olive colored living room We didnt say a word or even look at each other it was so quit we could have heard a pen drop in the other room As always she was in a bad mood and it was best I kept to myself My phone rang and I told them I would call them back later that I was with my mom My mom was furious Ii answered and immediately began to yell Youre nothing but a selfish teenager that doesnt even want to spend time with your own mom all you care about is your stupid little friends Like a bullet her words went through me they hurt worse than anything anyone had ever said to me How could she say that she was the one whom had just came back into my life after five years and wouldnt even talk to me unless it was to yellRunning to the kitchen and grabbing the bottle of pills is the last thing I remember from that night Now on Christmas Eve I sat in a room at Laurel ridge Treatment Center that smelt like dirty gym socks with six other girls
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