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The day my niece was born was a day that changed my life forever I made one of the most important decisions of my life that day That day involved many emotional moments and a lot of suspense It all started with a phone call from my brother and then evolved into basically a waiting game but once the waiting was over it became one of the days that changed my life foreverOn February 23 2008 my parents and I were returning home from going out to eat As we were walking up the steps my mom received a phone call and she began to get a worried look on her face The phone call only lasted about 20 seconds and it was my oldest brother Jeff who called my mother All he said to her was get to the hospital immediately because Lindsey my sister-in-law is going in to surgery for an emergency C-section So my parents and I rushed out of the house and jumped right back into the car All we knew was there was an emergency and my brother was really freaked out which worried us all very muchArriving at the hospital was a big relief but then we had to get to the waiting room where my brother was and we didnt know what kind of news would be awaiting us when we got there The moment we walked into the waiting room we knew that something was terribly wrong My brother had his head in his hands and his elbows on his knees When he lifted his head I saw something I hadnt saw in a very long time he had tears running down his face and I could see the fear in his eyes Seeing him like that made me want to just break down and cry right thereWe received very shocking news from my brother
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