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Who am I Can any person tell me who am I just from my name Can person tell me from reading a background check on my life what kind of woman Im going to develop into I can be a scientist lawyer cartoonist actress or just an average citizen living on a tropical island I am an 18 year old high school student in the City of Philadelphia However ahead of me is a life full of opportunities In Life I can be whatever it is that I want to be Who can say that I cannot This confidence was on the ground ready to take flight I only needed determination to lift off however this determination was not always there until I heard about May 21 2011 There were many events that had impacted my life however the day the world was going to end had changed my perspective on my life forever As a child in a home of five sisters and two brothers I wasnt very sociable I was the youngest of eight and most intelligent than my two brothers and six sisters I had to make decisions for myself because I was showered with little attention by my single parent mother This was only because of my siblings constant disobedience My family means the world to me As a family we struggled As a family we cried However one thing I knew was that I was different I was an outcast in my home I enjoyed school and learning many things from the world around me I knew I wanted to be successful Even as a little toddler my dreams where big There was a time I wanted to scream but I remained quiet Times I wanted to dance but my heart was the only thing Dancing beats The problem was I was extremely shy
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