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It all started on a day where the sun glared down It was a normal day excluding the heat I was at my cousins house Hey why dont we go to the pool today I said my idea got my cousins attention so we stop our video games and begin to start putting together a plan Abdullahi the eldest of my cousins said why dont we just ask one of our parents to watch us as we swim the rest of looked at him like he had a second when Abdirahman the middle child of my cousin said the idea wont for two reasons one mom wont do it she doesnt even like the pool and two your mom just had a baby dont get me started on your dad we got silent after that A couple of seconds later my aunt just walk through door she looked at us before saying what are you guys doing sitting around go outside and play then she walked into the kitchen We all looked at eachother then gave a silent nod when Abdigafer the youngest of my cousin stood up and went to the kitchen A few tears here and there twenty minutes later a tear stricken Abdigafer gave us smile and nod we all jumped up and hugged him After we settled down Abdigafer said were leaving at two so everyone got and mom told me to you that your mom must give permission before we leave we leave to get ready for the pool The walk to my house felt so long and the heat does not make it any easier on me and when I finally made it to the door I contemplate how I would get my moms permission I enter my home and started to look for my mom I finally her in the kitchen cooking Hi mom I started she turns to me I continued today is
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