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With Great Power Comes Too Much Responsibility: Why I Wouldn't Want to Be a Superhero

In this essay, the student explains why they do not want to be a superhero. The student cites the increased scrutiny and responsibility, as well as the added pressures put on female superheroes.
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Bridget's feedback:

"I like these points you make about the challenges of the "great responsibility" aspect of gaining "great power." Your source usage moves the discussion beyond speculation and into an analytical and thoughtful place. I am hoping you can expand on a claim in the last paragraph--"I would never be able to obtain those special powers...": does this refer to the power beyond physical strength that your body paragraphs discuss? or does this address the exercise that makes up the essay? This is likely a word choice issue that can be fixed up with some revision; if this is designed as a rebuttal to the prompt itself, I recommend also working with the language to show you aren't shutting down the conversation (e.g., "I was never one to imagine myself... because I knew that I would never...; however, after exploring the topic in this essay, I can say that...")."

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