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Determination is very powerful It can make you go beyond your natural limits and do what you never could before Rudy was one of those very determined people Ever since he was a small child he had always had a burning desire to play on the Notre Dame football team His determination helped him to conquer his trials and barriers in his disillusionment and finally join the team Rudys initiation in Rudy shows that if you are determined to fulfill your dreams you will through Rudy getting into Holy Cross through Rudy getting into Notre Dame and through him getting on the Notre Dame football team and in a game Rudy was so determined that that he decided to go to Holy Cross just to bring his grades up so he could get into Notre Dame He quit his job and moved to South Bend so he could go to Holy Cross He applied in the middle of the night because he was so eager to go to college He talked to the reverend to get into Holy Cross for a semester Rudy was studying extra hard to get good grades He also got a tutor to help him to make sure he got his grades up Rudy was determined to go to college and he did Rudy had always wanted to go to Notre Dame and he was determined that he would When Pete bought him a Notre Dame jacket Rudy wore it everywhere He even waited patiently and went to Holy Cross for 2 years He brought his grades up at Holy Cross because of his determination to get in to Notre Dame Rudy applied for Notre Dame 4 times without ever giving up He also went to help paint the helmets and showed school spirit even though he didnt go there Rudys determination to attend Notre Dame helped him achieve his goal Rudys life long dream was to play a game with
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