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"I am sympathetic to your arguments, but they need some clarification, and you need to smooth the rough edges. You say socialism is characterized by envy and self-sacrifice, but you fail to explain, and in fact you say nothing more at all about envy. To mention “the psychotic hatred of capitalism” begs the question: who is exhibiting this? If you want to convince the reader, such pointed comments are not going to help, and in fact, they are going to put some readers on the defensive. Take a gentle stance and clearly present your case."
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