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The Differences between High School Life and College Life

This compare and contrast takes a look at the differences between attending high school and college. The student discusses scheduling, attendance, and academic expectations, noting that high school prepares students for the rigor of college, whereas college prepares students for the real world.
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Bridget's feedback:

"This is a well-organized essay that presents the comparisons clearly and logically for your reader. The structure of each paragraph shows good control over the discussion, and your use of specific examples to support the broader point about responsibility creates cohesiveness.

The writing is clear and shows good mechanics, though I do recommend another passthrough to catch some errors and to fix up a few moments of unclear or imprecise phrasing. For example, you write that "you can pick the days and the times you want to take each class" in college; this sounds like you can actually pick any time for the class to be scheduled, though I don't think this is the intended meaning (I believe you are making the point that classes are scheduled throughout the day, with multiple options). This is a matter of language, so just watch out for those opportunities to make sure your point is being clearly and precisely made. In terms of formatting, check your style guide for page formatting, line spacing, and paragraph formatting (indents). My last note is that the copy I am reading is missing all apostrophes, so make sure any final submission file has those restored."

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