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The Earliest English Colonies in the New World

This essay on England's colonization of the New World profiles Jamestown and the New England area. The student explains that various factors shaped the unique identities of the colonies: economy type, relationship with Native Americans, religion, and the demographics of the newcomers.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You've brought together a good set of historical details to help the reader understand the wider narrative of English colonization of the New World. For the first half of the paper, it's not initially clear that you will be covering more than Jamestown; an explicit thesis statement at the beginning of the paper will help signpost this for the reader, giving them the tools to understand the shift at the top of the second page and how it fits into the wider discussion.

Another task will be to properly integrate quotations into the text and place punctuation after the parenthetical citation (treat it as part of the sentence). Use a careful proofread to catch some minor existing errors (such as "The Mayflower": don't capitalize "the" and italicize the name of the ship)."

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