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"You've included a lot of useful information about Williams' life. However, much of it seems to be strung together almost haphazardly without transitions or analysis as to what effect the events had on him. For example, you mention that his sister was hospitalized and that this had an effect on him, but the next sentence simply states that he later went to school. Examining what effect his sister's hospitalization had on his personality or career would add depth to your essay.
There are a handful of awkwardly worded sentences that should addressed with an edit. "Terminal hypochondriac" is an oxymoron and while it is sometimes used as a play on words, the term you are looking for is likely "chronic hypochondriac.""
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