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The Life and Times of Andrew Jackson

In this informative essay, the student provides a detailed look at the life and times of Andrew Jackson, from his early years through the last day of his presidency. The student examines Jackson's reputation, his political alignment, and his role in the Trail of Tears.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"This is a lively piece of writing that demonstrates your control over the historical details and context. Your word choice and use of narrative elements contributes to a dynamic reading experience that the reader easily slips into and follows across the paragraphs. (Check your style guide for page formatting, as the current lack of indents, spaces between paragraphs, and line spacing create a visual barrier for your reader.) I recommend a final proofread to catch some recurring issues, including a tendency to leave out the second comma that closes off appositives and parentheticals; this impacts clarity and ends up impacting the overall sentence, sometimes rendering them as incomplete. While this doesn't tend to have a wider clarity impact on, say, the paragraph thanks to an overall lucid style, it can make for a bumpy experience and impact ethos. As a final note, include your sources as a bibliography at the end. This helps the reader understand your work as the researcher, asserts your credibility in dealing with the body of literature, and lets your reader follow up as needed."

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