The Effects of the Components of Poverty on the Development of Children
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"You present a significant amount of quality evidence to support your position. You have included a well-rounded conclusion that is compelling to the reader. As written, the paper does not have a gripping introduction. You should include a paragraph that includes an overview about what will appear in your paper and a thesis statement that guides your writing and lets the reader know what they will be reading about. While you have provided a significant amount of evidence, some of it does not include citations. Any time that you present information that you acquired from another source, it is important that you credit the original author so that you avoid plagiarism issues. Because of the lack of introduction, and the way that concepts are unevenly elaborated upon, it is unclear what the specific focus of your paper is. Rather that your paper feeling about it being about the effects of poverty, it feels more like it is about the effects of single-parenting."
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