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Kibin. (2024). Consequences of population growth in the arab world. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/consequences-of-population-growth-in-the-arab-world-LDCgLyyE
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"This is a thoughtful essay on an important subject. The student should be clear about the growth of the Arab population. To double more than ten times means the population is 1,000 times what it was. Is this correct? The first paragraph ends confusingly. The population caused a lot of what? It is imprecise to say the number of people is more than the resources. One might say, for example, that resources are insufficient to support this number of people. Similarly, the writer means that three or four kids survived, but that is not what the sentence says. Note that numbers one through nine should be spelled out. Informal phrases such as “a lot” should be avoided, and so should contractions. The em dash in the second paragraph interrupts the flow of thought, and should be eliminated. “In” should be “on” in “in the other hand.” The essay should have a stronger introduction and conclusion. Introduce the issue, amplify in the body, and form a clear conclusion."
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Kibin. (2024). Consequences of population growth in the arab world. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/consequences-of-population-growth-in-the-arab-world-LDCgLyyE
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