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Hamlet's Failure Is Rooted in His Inability to Act Decisively

This brief essay argues that Hamlet's failure is based on his inability to act decisively. The essay concludes by suggesting that "To be or not to be?" may be the wrong question for Hamlet to ask himself.
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Bob's feedback:

"You have a great thesis to your paper, and with some further development and organization, it will make for a strong statement.

The essay feels a little disorganized. Make sure to break it down into paragraphs with a clear and separate introduction and conclusion. Make sure you have clear and smooth transitions between subjects.

Your comparison between Hamlet and Brutus is an interesting take, but it is somewhat superficial and doesn't add much to the discussion about Hamlet's character. It may be a good idea to omit this part completely.

Quotations that you reproduce in your essay should have a direct link to your argument and should not stand on their own. Consider trimming these down to examples that clearly illustrate your own thoughts."

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