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As she walked up the decaying steps the girl falls backwards next thing she knows shes falling though space where theres no air her eyes are being suck from their sockets gravity is pulling her to know where she cant stop falling cant stand up she evenly runs out of air then blacks outtill all of sudden she wakes up She does not know where she is all though she sees doctors looking down at her she ask where she is and whats her name they answer she cant remember how she got there your now an adult your at a hospital you have been a sleep for 20 years she gets up looks around the doctors say when you fell that your feel good you can go home she says thank you and levees she goes to a motel spends the 5 nights there and the for whole time shes thinks to here self that this place isnt true that this reality is fake The next day she wakes up she decides to go to the park talking to someone but that someone is really herself She does that till she gets to the park sits on a bench looks around thinking that something feels wrong feels as if this isnt the way it should be screech she turns around its a railway train stopping Then she has an idea to stop this fake reality she walks up to the train it levees she then lays on the railway waits till the next on she starts yelling HIT MET ME WITH ALL YOU GOT STRIKE ME DOWN WERE I LAY NOW an incent by stander walks up and tells her to get up she says NO LET ME ESCAPE FROM THIS FAKE CRUL WORLD HIT ME NOW the incent by stander goes to get help from the police mean while train comes as it comes closer and closer and even
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