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In 1787 our forefathers ratified the constitution of the United States of America which contains the most important document to any American citizen the Bill of Rights The first amendment of the Bill of Rights states Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion or prohibiting the establishment thereof or abridging the freedom of speech or of the press or the right of the people peaceably to assemble and to petition the government for a redress of grievances these freedoms commonly called the freedom of expression are of the most important rights in a truly democratic society Without them there would be no new ideas we would all conform under totalitarian rule for fear of punishment However when I a common student at West Rowan High School try to express my feelings on the state of the Bill of Rights in schools today by making a computer presentation in multimedia class my work is declared bad and my teacher and assistant principal do one of the most un-American things imaginable they censored it I had to re-make the presentation and lighten the harsh tone and also erase the anarchy symbol from it The teacher said that she was worried about me for reasons such as my feelings on the freedom of religion were almost satanic because I said teachers should not be able to publicly practice religion in schools because it will encourage students to become a part of that religion The presentation was neither slanderous nor obscene but it did criticize teachers and administrators calling them fascist dictators At first I was angry at the school because I could wear clothing that was obscene or contained liquor advertisements now they have completely taken away my freedom of speech This of course proved my argument that teachers and administrators are totalitarians As one journalist
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