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Child Abuse Statistics and the Effective Protection of Children

This essay discusses the problem of large numbers of unsubstantiated reports of child abuse and their effect on the efficient protection of children at risk.
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Jim's feedback:

"Punctuation should be placed inside quotation marks in American English. “Professional” should be plural in the second paragraph, “had” is misspelled in the following paragraph, and later, a period has a preceding space. You can avoid some of these issues by proofreading your work and running a grammar check. You mention “the city’s child welfare agency, but you do not indicate the city. The sentence on page 2, “The determination …,” is confusing and should be rewritten. It is good practice to avoid informal terms such as contractions, as well as “a whole lot.” The phrase “extreme investigations” is imprecise. Extreme in what way? Your first example implies that the child’s injuries were sustained while under city supervision.

Overall, your writing is complicated, which can result in confusion. Simple, concise writing is easier to read and understand."

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