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To choose one event in ones life that was an important changingevent is extremely difficult For ones life always has many importantchanging events I know in my life I have experienced manyimportant changing events but to choose one is fairly easy for me The reason for this is because the changing event in my life hasstayed within me every minute and hour of my everydayIn the beginning of ones life parents are all one has For me itwas different I only had one parent my dad I looked up to my dadas someone I could trust and share feelings with but never thefeeling of fear I always knew deep inside my heart that it was nevermy fault that I never did anything so wrong to deserve what ISince I was seven until I was fourteen years old I was abusedphysically by my own father that I trusted and looked up to I couldnever understand why the little things I did could make him so angryuntil now My dad was always stressed about his job and financialproblems He also had a controlling problem not just with me butwith whole family I knew if I even made a simple mistake on myhomework like a coma I would be punished physically One day my father decided to check on how I was doing inschool He found out I was missing a large amount of homework andmy grades were failing When he got home he was furious and that iswhen I received the worst beating of my life When the beating over Icleaned the blood from the floor and my face and went to bed In themorning I knew when he would return from work I would get anotherbeating and I did Once again I found myself cleaning my blood fromthe floor and my and face I knew I could not take this any longer soI went to the Windsor Police Department with my aunt This wasextremely difficult for
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