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The sound of the bat cracking coaches yelling fans cheering and your teammates rooting for you is the best feeling in the world Once the bat makes contact with the ball you forget about everything around you and you only focus on one thing making it down the base line to be safe With a team that has won 6 out of 7 tournaments entered you feel unstoppable You never want to let your teammates down so you pour your heart and soul into the gamePlaying for the Flames was by far the best experience of my softball career Winning six out of seven tournaments is a hard thing to achieve we practiced five days a week each being two to three hours long The team we had worked perfectly together having twelve girls get along the way we did was an accomplishment in itself The level of skill we shared shined during our games We won so many games in the USSA division that we got kicked out and needed to go to the higher division ASA In this division we played teams up to two years older than us and we would beat them with no problem We were the ultimate dream teamWhen we qualified for Nationals we were beyond ecstatic We knew we were good but not that good Our coach gave us two days off we then practiced harder than ever on Saturdays we had two practices a day We needed to make sure we could keep up with the other teams When the time came for us to go to York PA we felt unstoppableOur first day there was awesome we went undefeated We played a team two years older than us and beat them in the 5th inning I remember having a double play and having my coaches being so happy It was exactly what we needed at that time The parents were so proud of the day
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