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In just a short seven months my life has drastically changed for the better I got the courage to leave a three year abusive relationship found the man of my dreams who had been right under my nose for five years got my first job at nineteen bought my dream car a convertible and got myself back in college despite all odds and negativity from people around me I have worked very hard and defeated all odds to be where I am in such a short period of time This past eight months has unquestionably been a huge accomplishment in my life Some people call it luck some an accident and some call it fate I say it was all of this as well as my actions First you should know what my life was like and how I decided to change it I had been with the same person for three years We will call him Nick He was an abusive and controlling alcoholic and was only twenty when I left him He was eighteen and I was sixteen two months from seventeen when we decided to date Things were good for the first five to six months He treated me like a princess and Im not going to lie I loved it He bought me flowers jewelry and candy all the time Whatever I wanted I got no questions asked We partied every weekend like most normal high school students Then around June his true colors started to show He would not let me get a summer job and he did not let me go out with my friends After I graduated in 2002 I turned down two softball scholarships and moved to Waco with him Im not sure why I did but by this time he had hit me a couple of times and started acting more like a parent than a boyfriend by that I mean he told me what I
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