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OCADHeres a little story to imagine youve planned everything to make your life perfect-a well-paid job a loving wife and two adorable children As you retire early and move to your new home you cant help but feel a warm breeze of contentment as youre cruising along on a summer afternoon Suddenly from out of nowhere a drunken illegal alien with tequila on his breath sideswipes your car in a Chevy Nova killing your family instantly and leaving you mortally wounded Now I assume most all of you have seen Independence Day so you are probably familiar with ascendancy and people trying to take over the world There is a similar scenario going on in the United States today Conspirators endeavor to obtain what is not theirs Their beguiling apparitions are nothing but clever masks which proclaim hope and freedom Only those who can strike through those masks can see vividly the intentions of these invaders These are they which are labeled Illegal AliensI know youre not laughing because its not funny For example 7-11 Once an American dream before the Illegal Aliens came into the picture Conceive that you walk wearily into a 7-11 yearning for a large Pepsi filled with ice and brimming with tiny bubbles popping at the surface But no the cashier can only say Thank you come again in a bad accent Youve probably also taken an extensive trip once or twice along a barren interstate But before leaving you want to make sure your family doesnt starve on the journey So you drive through at McDonalds and order 2 big macs with cheese 2 quarter pounders with cheese 2 cheeseburgers with cheese a couple large cokes and a happy meal for the little ones Half-way to nowhere you are being consumed with a primal urge to eat And to your chagrin you open the bag and stare with incredulity at 2 hamburgers and a couple friesfacial expression
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