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The Importance of Decisions in Ivan Klima's "Divorce"

In this essay analyzing the short story "Divorce" by Ivan Klima, the student explores how the main character's choices express themes of loyalty and sacrifice.
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Bridget's feedback:

"As you move into the next stage of the writing process, focus on clarity at a few levels. This will include using the introduction and conclusion to help the reader understand the main focus and takeaways, including the thesis and supporting claims; organizing the body paragraphs purposefully (consider one paragraph for each supporting idea, as in a traditional five paragraph essay); and working within each paragraph to make sure transitions and similar guiding language move the reader from sentence to sentence. By refining these elements, you'll make sure the reader encounters the essay as a cohesive and focused project that advances a particular overarching claim about the story's subtext, message, themes, or craft. I understand this draft to explore how character and character choices outline theme--does this resonate with your vision for this essay? with any prompt you might be working with?

Working with the lower-order concerns of mechanics will also help with clarity; at this point in the writing process, however, you will want to focus on higher-order concerns (argumentation, structure) first."

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