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I believe family is one of the most important things in life Without them we would be very lonely individuals The love family can bring you is infinite You know that moment when everything falls down and in a blink of an eye you loose everything you have I hope no one gets to experienced what happened to me Luckily I have a very supportive family who helped me and my mother and siblings get through this hard timeIt was a Saturday night I still remember it like if it was yesterday it was the day I lost my dad without even saying goodbye to him I was celebrating one of my best friends birthdays when I get the call of my mother saying she needed me to come home She sounded very sad and worried As I am heading home I received another call from her telling me to meet her in the hospital I was sick worried because I did not know what was going on and why she was going to the hospital When I get to the hospital I find her in the waiting room This is the part where everything starts falling apart She explains to me that my father has been shot in some type of assault in my uncles house He has received several shots in his stomach and the doctors are about to perform surgery on him I never thought these would happen to me someday that l was about to lose my dad When the doctors came back they gave us the bad news He did not make it those were his words Suddenly I felt a big emptiness in my stomach what was I supposed to do without my daddyNot only did I lose my dad but also I lost my home we lived in this building of apartments for a very long time but when the manager find out what happened to my dad
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